azuremoon
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Post by azuremoon on Dec 6, 2012 11:08:39 GMT -6
Unless I'm just a ditz, I don't think it's too much telling! I don't see any 'telling' with this sneak preview. XD Other than Ozai doesn't know how to deal with people. Lol. But I like it!! +)
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Post by azuremoon on Dec 6, 2012 13:21:33 GMT -6
OMG> XDD BAHAHAHAHA!!! I love how he's like ...think of things that will make me go down not up...damnit >XDD I LOVE IT!! Rawrrr Zuko. Rawrrr Mine! I know you said you don't like Sparky but I do. =P
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Post by chromeknickers on Dec 6, 2012 20:28:03 GMT -6
Zutara as kids arc is turning out to be rather long. First one is 2,500 words and the second one is 1,800 and counting. Sokka is currently getting all up in another kid's 'grill'.
Yeah, I'm tired. I dunno what I'm saying...
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Post by azuremoon on Dec 6, 2012 21:48:44 GMT -6
YES! KID ZUTARA IS YES!! WOO!! Or even just as friend. Just kid Gaang...hilarious!!
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Post by ladyavatar on Dec 7, 2012 18:06:42 GMT -6
Okay, so I decided to just go with what you guys were saying about my third-person POV style not being too telling (I really, really hope it turned out okay) and finished off the Ozai-centric one-shot! It clocks in at just shy over 6,000 words.
Unfortunately, after finishing it, I have a sudden and intense need to write more Urzai like this:
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Post by azuremoon on Dec 7, 2012 21:58:14 GMT -6
URGH!! @_@_@_@_@__@@ You are killin me here! URZAI!! =33 I love this sooo much!
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Post by kathrynlacey on Dec 8, 2012 0:36:16 GMT -6
I want to read this... OMG! ladyavatar, you're killin' me. I can't read your fic until it's complete, but argh! :: dies ::
I swear every time I decide I've finished a draft, I realize it's not remotely finished. There's a whole section of the first chapter that I'm changing to be from Zuko's point of view, and ugh... On another note, I'm having fun incorporating some lines from canon situations into this because they just... fit so damned well...
Awkward Zuko will forever be awkward. Doesn't matter that he's twenty. He will be awkward forever! Bwahahah!
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azuremoon
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Post by azuremoon on Dec 8, 2012 0:37:15 GMT -6
I love awkward Zuko! XD
Almost done w/ Pride. @@ Prejudice will be done tomorrow. Fading fast. @@
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Post by kathrynlacey on Dec 8, 2012 1:01:36 GMT -6
azuremoon, you used my quote! AND OMFG! I love that Sokka is the one saying it. Jonathan often calls me Sokka when I make jokes because my jokes are awful... I'm excited to read it when it's complete!
boogum, psh... Whatever inspires you should be what you work on first! It'll be better that way. I am honestly amazed that you can update things so quickly. I swear I get an email a day saying that one of your stories or another has been updated. You're like a machine!
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Post by azuremoon on Dec 8, 2012 1:05:49 GMT -6
Ditto. ZM is kind of all >XD
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