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Post by ladyavatar on Dec 8, 2012 8:00:37 GMT -6
The clearing of a throat from Iroh had him looking at the Tribeswoman once more, watching as she shoveled ocean kumquats into her mouth. He struggled to find something meaningful to say to her. "You, uh, have quite an appetite for a girl." He thought he saw his Uncle cringe, and Zuko felt his confidence deflating. ^You can't wait for me to be done? That's sounds like an amazing scene - now I'm the one desperately waiting.
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Post by azuremoon on Dec 8, 2012 10:32:44 GMT -6
See Kathyrn? Awesomeness!!!! =D
And posting my own progress for Prejudice (hopefully almost done):
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Post by azuremoon on Dec 9, 2012 11:56:48 GMT -6
OMG! 0,0 Soooo want to know now! AHH!! And =( I would post my progress on Sublime but. T_T_T No progress yet. ><
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Post by mrspettyfer on Dec 10, 2012 21:41:16 GMT -6
Urzai! There really needs to be more of it. Loving your snippet ladyavatar. I've only got about 1,000 words for the update for the rise of one. Ugh. Taking forever. I had to write one scene like five ways before I liked it, lmao.
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Post by azuremoon on Dec 10, 2012 21:49:07 GMT -6
Speaking of Ozai, not yet Urzai. Though hmm. I will try to bring that in too. Here is a snippet of my oneshot about Ozai for Lady Avatar!!
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Post by ladyavatar on Dec 10, 2012 22:31:12 GMT -6
Urzai! There really needs to be more of it. Loving your snippet ladyavatar. ^*Fist pump* Epic, another Urzai fan. I wish there were more stories looking back on their past or just addressing anything Urzai-themed - I always feel so sad and lonely shipping them. Oh, and . . . OMG YAY RISE OF ONE!!! You really were one of the writers who initially inspired me to begin writing fanfiction at all, for which I will always humbly bow to you in gratitude. Here is a snippet of my oneshot about Ozai for Lady Avatar!! ^Yay! I'm super excited about this story and can't wait to read it! XD When do you think it will be done? Also, this is the very last excerpt of the one-shot you guys are getting (I've been working on it some more and now it's approaching 8,000 words - so much for studying for finals). Keep in mind this is a DRAFT still subject to beta-reading and revision. Blah, blah, blah more stuff, and then:
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Post by azuremoon on Dec 10, 2012 22:32:38 GMT -6
Honestly? No idea. T_T IF it weren't Zutara Month, I'd have a better idea. But I WANT it done. XD I want to finish it for you!!
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Post by mrspettyfer on Dec 10, 2012 22:43:56 GMT -6
*hugs* You just made my day! I've barely been in this thread so I'm out of the loop on what everyone is working on. What's your plot/idea for your Urzai fic?
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Post by azuremoon on Dec 10, 2012 22:45:50 GMT -6
mrspettyfer, is that your penname on ff too?
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Post by ladyavatar on Dec 10, 2012 22:52:10 GMT -6
*hugs* You just made my day! ^You make my life every day, every single day when I go on your FFN page and read through anything your writing talent has touched. ^Although it's technically a companion story to my Fire and Ice main fic, it's just a look back on Ozai's life as I see it developing. It begins at his birth and winds along through his childhood, into young adulthood (and meeting Ursa), and finally ending at some point during the time when my version of Team Avatar, Zuko included, is in Ba Sing Se (which is where it becomes a companion to Fire and Ice). Basically, it's a headcanon story. And let's just say that, when Ozai and Ursa first meet in my version, he has no idea she's of noble birth. Nor does she, in turn, know of his royal status. Nor do they find out for quite some time.
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